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Days are passing... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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Days are passing One after the other they flow Night Day Night Day Without you here I sit Thinking thoughts that lead to more When Why How Where Did I dream you up Did I dare myself to find you Or were you always there Waiting for me to say hello Whispering my name Soothing words of like In a way that makes me smile While waiting for the knowable goodbye Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (01-15-2008 12:40 AM).] |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Ohhh, darlin', you write so sad and with such beauty. Is all well? Sounds like you have some heart hurt you are working out ... I have bandaids, hugs and lots of boo boo kisses. xoxxoxo Ali |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
hmmm... yes it does sound sad... but I'm not sad my sweet Ali... just words written from my heart. thank you for your lovely hugs... love RDB  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b...never goodbye, but just moments between hellos...nice work lady |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Roniece, I love your words, though they suggest a kind of "suspension". There is a sweetness in deep yearning and the days hold a dream, that after all could realize ... goodbye can wait. baci e abbracci Margherita |
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Im not a poet and i no it Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 14uk, peterborough |
only word i can describe this poem is cute ...its sad but wrote so beautifuly lovely piece =D |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you all... your comments are so nice on my work... appreciate it love RDB 'moments between hellos' .... I like this Mr Daark... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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xrobxscottx Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 31United States |
"There was never a more solemn goodbye than hello." Nice poem. ^^ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
beautiful...yes "moments between hellos" I don't feel sad when I read this. I accept that life is full of hellos and goodbyes. It's all about how we handle each life experience. People will come and go. Some will stay, some will teach us a lesson. But it is unfortunate that sometimes we forget this and let our sadness overwhelm us  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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