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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
The heart in my chest is bleeding, But blood never shows a stain. If only behind this mask of tranquility You could see a soul that is grieving... My heart has the same ability To suffer - to drown in pain. If you knew how much one word could mean... If you only saw me falling Apart right in front of your eyes... But until the last drop of my blood is shed, My true love's solemnly sworn not to die. I guess, I'm like a castle, Ruined on the battle's last day, Or novel with half pages missing... The other half pages is frayed. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I really like this one!!!!!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing of the desire to hold onto love until the end...later when we go on we can see that it was just a lesson to prepare us for love...James |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Always love your poems. They are all very romantic!!!!and emotional. enjoyed. Sometime I have no time to leave a note but I do read all your poems. (I spend too much time in unpoetic threads.) Tom |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I am so enjoying your wonderful work... well done... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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