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When he is in love ...
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When he is in love ... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * When he is in love ... * he kisses her bare shoulders and lets her lean onto him to feel the butterflies within he tickles her ears with his breath and makes her collapse into him to hear the brawl of his blood he turns her face towards him and lets her eyes gaze into his to slice off the rest of the world he puts his arms around her and engages in the skin to skin touch to start the slow dance in quick sand he brushes his lips over her eyelids and makes her swallow her words to moan together the song of desire he calls for the moon and the stars and allows her to perform the starring role to be dissolved and consumed by his fire * |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, now this is lovely work, enjoyed it |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Beautiful, dear Margherita. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Breathtaking! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOO-WOO..this is hot! I really liked it! Passion looks good on you! do you know this man? does he have a brother? lol! You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
wow,wow,wow, tell me the whole story!!! wonderful. TM |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, The picture is beautiful. Is this your work? The poem is also beautiful, and goes very well with the picture. This is truly excellent work. I like it very much. Youse da pro! Bobby |
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Im not a poet and i no it Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 14uk, peterborough |
WoW the picture goes relly well with your piece of work, I ♥ the writing BEAUTIFUL =D |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
sensual..... most people can't write about sex in English. You can..... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
The picture is remarkable with the figures melding into one another. Did the poem inspire the picture or vice versa? In either case they make a perfect pair. Joyce |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yum...delicious...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Pure beauty and love. You swept me away. A |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my, Margherita, your words put the 'love' in lovely! This my dear, is aother  I have been accumulating a library of your poetic works. An avid fan, Angelo Terrestre  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Margherita... this is devine! loved every word of it...  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear Poet friends, you have made my day with your replies! I could not find the author of this beautiful picture, though it resembles Picasso's blue period ... (it took me quite some time to find the perfect pic to accompany my words). I wish I could paint or draw like this!! Brothers? This kind is rare, very rare, I fear!! love Margherita |
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SouthernJustice Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 159 |
wonderfully and beautufilly romantic. VERY much enjoyed. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
wow!! and a "slow dance in quick sand(!!)" applause! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you too dear SJ and dear Bruce for your generous comments. with loving kindness Margherita |
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rugged_miss Junior Member
since 2007-10-27
Posts 26 |
As you rightly said, "when he is in love....." It's a beautiful feeling when you find it though. And you have a beautiful way of describing the whole feeling. The art was great too... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
simply beautiful margherita |
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