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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-01-15 01:44 AM





Here I stand,
in the middle of
nowhere,

My vision is foggy,
not a clear path,
to follow,

How did I get here?
I am lost,
left alone.

The air is cold,
my surroundings,
are empty,

Everyting is dead,
no color,
grey,

Then comes silence,
just your voice,
you hear,

Wanting warmth,
I will find my way,
back to life.

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

© Copyright 2008 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-01-15 07:41 AM


I love both the picture and your words, dear ARH. Sometimes we get lost in such misty surroundings and our hearts are affected, I know. But I do not doubt that the sun will pierce through the mist soon to guide you out of this lonely mood.

love and hugs
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2008-01-15 11:47 AM


Thank you for your love and hugs~

Much appreciated!

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Clang
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since 2005-12-15
Posts 222

3 posted 2008-01-15 02:39 PM


Another masterpiece.  I could just walk into this picture.
tonyV
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since 2008-01-14
Posts 36

4 posted 2008-01-15 04:37 PM


Your imagery is stunning. The visuals also help, but even the words can just draw one out.

Yes, there remains a sense of hope! I enjoyed it.

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