Open Poetry #41 |
Lost |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Here I stand, in the middle of nowhere, My vision is foggy, not a clear path, to follow, How did I get here? I am lost, left alone. The air is cold, my surroundings, are empty, Everyting is dead, no color, grey, Then comes silence, just your voice, you hear, Wanting warmth, I will find my way, back to life. You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love both the picture and your words, dear ARH. Sometimes we get lost in such misty surroundings and our hearts are affected, I know. But I do not doubt that the sun will pierce through the mist soon to guide you out of this lonely mood. love and hugs Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you for your love and hugs~ Much appreciated! ~ARH You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Another masterpiece. I could just walk into this picture. |
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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
Your imagery is stunning. The visuals also help, but even the words can just draw one out. Yes, there remains a sense of hope! I enjoyed it. |
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