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kudanesh
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Peterborough,England

0 posted 2008-01-04 08:46 PM




allot of this world is full of crime
and the love i poses is not mine
it belongs to my god and this he does know
if i love him and others the path he will show

no this is not the path through life
there is no path with struggle and strife
but when the day comes that you lay down and die
you will open your eyes and you'll be in the sky

the rules that he sets are guide lines to me
if you brake them for good then god he will see
but if all you do ishurt just for fun
when you have died no more forgiving is done

if to your god you are true
then in return he's true to you
you do not have to go to church
or go off finding god in a world wide search

because were ever you are and were ever you go
just talk to your god and his love he will show
so where ever you are and whoevers around
you know that his love can always be found

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-01-04 08:54 PM


because were ever you are and were ever you go
just talk to your god and his love he will show
so where ever you are and whoevers around
you know that his love can always be found


Yes, I totally agree with these last lines, dear kudanesh.

God loves us and He wants us to share love. When we are able "to love our neighbours as much as we love ourselves", we fulfill our task down here and God enjoys us. He will forgive, rest assured, He knows of our weaknesses, He will forgive ALWAYS, how can a loving Father not forgive his children?

Love and light.
Margherita

kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
2 posted 2008-01-04 09:00 PM


thank you for words again

i do have a belife that yes god forgives all but those that do not repent for what they have done then they will go to were the fires buren bright with all the hate of this world and the life times befor it

if god forgave all there would be no hell

un less that would be earth?

Im not a poet and i no it
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uk, peterborough
3 posted 2008-01-15 12:20 PM


♥ly  piece of work =)
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-01-15 03:18 PM


Reminds me of that Norman Greenbaum song called "The Spirit in the Sky"..."Gonna go up to the spirit in the sky, thats where I'm going when I die, when I die and they lay me to rest, I'm gonna go to the place thats best"...James
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