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passing shadows
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0 posted 2008-01-14 07:57 PM

I Have A Crazy Man

(true story from long ago)

a funny thing happened today, and something so small
started it all... a simple phone call

the cell phone rang, I answered it
he said 'hey, what are you doing?'
'I'm at the airport' I replied
he gasped as thoughts were stewing

he yelled 'don't you move!
you stay right there!'
he slammed the phone down hard
geez, it hurt my hair

I shrugged and drank my coffee
then something caught my eye
he came bursting through the doors
and I was certain he would fly

he jumped right over the security scan
with flowers from the outside stand
and a teddy bear in his other hand
trailing behind him was the uniformed man

he blitzed through the concourse
until he finally spotted me
all out of breath and sweating
he came to a stop at my feet on one knee

with tears streaming down his face
he said 'without you, I'm no good'
he looked at the man beside me and proclaimed
'I love you more than he ever could'

and trying my hardest not to laugh
while he pleaded for mercy from me
I touched him and said to him quietly
'I'd like you to meet my brother,
he just flew in from DC'

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2008-01-14 08:01 PM

Oh...this was sweet!
Well deserved, and well timed!
Hugs You!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-01-14 11:34 PM

Dixie, this is classic!

What a treat!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-01-14 11:37 PM

I'm smiling here Dixie girl... that was great! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2008-01-15 01:37 AM

I read this and read it and laughed .. and am still laughing.

Wonderful story.

A

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-01-15 04:22 AM

Nice...James

Margherita
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Eternity

6 posted 2008-01-15 06:38 AM

These crazy men add some salt to life ... that was a great scene, rendered with very captivating words, dear Dixie!

Thank you for the smiles!

love and hugs
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

7 posted 2008-01-15 06:56 AM

I could just imagine~~

M

Im not a poet and i no it
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since 2008-01-15

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uk, peterborough

8 posted 2008-01-15 01:02 PM

Oh bless him, ♥ the work, i would of tried not to laugh to, he sounds like a keeper to go all that way to please you =D

Clang
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9 posted 2008-01-15 02:33 PM

This is so great! I LMAO! I love your work.

passing shadows
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10 posted 2008-01-15 09:32 PM

glad ya'll enjoyed this...thanks for the comments

Kamelian
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since 2008-01-14

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11 posted 2008-01-15 11:36 PM

Brill... very funny!

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2008-01-16 09:13 AM

A Kodak moment ~ to be sure! ~ and one to be remembered with great fondness! You captured it quite nicely with your pen!

Everything that happens to you, m'dear, is bigger than life! ~ Well, at least bigger than in most peoples' lives! lol

Precious!

Linda

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

13 posted 2008-01-16 08:54 PM

Wow Dixie, this is fantastic.

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