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Open Poetry #41

The Subtleties of Loving

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-01-13 11:36 AM

The Subtleties of Loving

Whispers sensate baritone caves
Awash the mind their subtle waves
Less the outcome more the ride
Pools a jewel, lap deep inside

Magnified these dreams foretell
Sparkled dust on life lived well
Mirrored truths but ageless myths
Soul deep trembles healed and kissed

Passing hour's silken surf
Journey bound resound its worth
Slight the hand made in caress
Honestly, each to address

Celebrated victories
Held upright in ambient seas
Wishes made and honor placed
So softly lipped and fully faced

A dream to build, a ship at sea
In tune the more, the more set free
A helpful hand to smile in turn
These subtleties, in love to learn

Copyright Kkh 1/12/08

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2008-01-13 01:42 PM

well done Kath, excellent piece...muy bueno
compradorererererreo

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

2 posted 2008-01-13 04:04 PM

The drift of verse, how sweet it is.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-01-14 04:15 PM

Nice...James

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