Open Poetry #41 |
Unremittent Dreams |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Unremittent dreams a resplendent woman… (awash in shadows and Winter moonlight) vanishes in the distance love comes no closer |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
song of twilight spring. The true "incurable Romanticism" Sigh!!! Tomtoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
what a beautiful dreamy vision! Love is in your heart! love margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love can be illusive as well as elusive, at times. May she linger for your longing loving, come next dream. Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
And you wouldn't dare run after her these days. This reminds me of one of the old, romantic movies in black and white, maybe in the 40's. Ida |
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surrealpoetics Junior Member
since 2008-01-13
Posts 13Spokane, Washington |
very deep in thought and passion. i loved it, my incurable romantic... ~Valdron~ |
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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
A very bold poem, but beautifully done at the same time. It's short but to the point, and there's much truth in those words. A sort of scary truth. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dream-catchers are great for capturing those elusive love-spirits. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This poem haunts me. Beautifully written images. |
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