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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-01-12 11:18 PM


  Unremittent
    dreams

a resplendent
    woman…
(awash in shadows
and Winter
  moonlight)
vanishes in the
   distance

love comes no
   closer


© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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1 posted 2008-01-12 11:59 PM


song of twilight spring. The true  "incurable Romanticism"
Sigh!!!
Tomtoo

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-01-13 04:05 AM


what a beautiful dreamy vision!

Love is in your heart!

love
margherita

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2008-01-13 06:39 PM


Love can be illusive as well as elusive, at times.

May she linger for your longing loving, come next dream.


Linda

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-01-13 07:00 PM


And you wouldn't dare run after her these days. This reminds me of one of the old, romantic movies in black and white, maybe in the 40's.
                              Ida

surrealpoetics
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5 posted 2008-01-14 03:20 AM


very deep in thought and passion.

i loved it, my incurable romantic...

~Valdron~

tonyV
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6 posted 2008-01-14 04:04 AM


A very bold poem, but beautifully done at the same time. It's short but to the point, and there's much truth in those words. A sort of scary truth.
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Gaia
7 posted 2008-01-14 07:55 AM


Dream-catchers are great for capturing those elusive love-spirits.
ArtSolstice
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8 posted 2008-01-14 03:31 PM


This poem haunts me. Beautifully written images.
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