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benjamin106
Junior Member
since 2008-01-05
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0 posted 2008-01-12 03:28 PM





Everything is changing
blowing in the soft wind
like dust on the surface of our hearts
always asking
what are we doing here?


Going through life
wondering what will happen next
closing your eyes
watching the hourglass spin
thinking of what it means.


Alone with your thoughts
wishing for something
to break this spell
giving it all away
coming home to your true love.


Piano keys play
as you smile into light
holding their hands
looking into their eyes
answering your own question.

Ben Prins 2008

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EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2008-01-13 02:15 AM


very, very good. i liked this alot. i hope more people comment on this because it deserves recognition
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-01-13 03:52 AM


Piano keys play
as you smile into light
holding their hands
looking into their eyes
answering your own question.


yes, perfectly beautiful!

love
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-01-13 05:43 AM


Enjoyed your thoughts, Ben. They make a very nice poem.
                               Ida

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
4 posted 2008-01-13 12:03 PM


very beautiful, truly. love the read!!
Tom

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