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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Sureties For one stolen moment frozen in an eagle’s call, soft-salmon clouds (surfing a deep-azure Aeolian sea) hang in sunset-surprise on the razor-cusp of silver-grey mountains, ‘passing’ as well. One recalls but three sublime ‘sureties’: wind, time, and change… wind…time…and change! ~ |
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Hyaunt Member
since 2007-07-12
Posts 74 |
very nice again! Hyaunt |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You have an unending well-spring of descriptive phrases, never before seen in a volume of poetry, and I am always pleasantly startled by what you come up with. Enjoyed reading this Liz |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Your beautiful poem reminds me Buddha tells us “Neither fire nor wind, birth nor death can erase our good deeds”; Thoreau tells us “The finest workers in stone are not copper or steel tools, but the gentle touches of air and water working at their leisure with a liberal allowance of time”; and Heraclitus tells us “Nothing endures but change”. Especially enjoyed: "For one stolen moment frozen in an eagle’s call," ...and all your fine images. |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
this whole read was imagery, reminded me of an alaskan cruise i went on. very nice |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
Your words are as fresh and crisp as a sunrise, tempered with the pearlescent opal of a morning mist. Lovely poem. |
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