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Open Poetry #41

Love at First sight

Frances The Mute
Junior Member

since 2008-01-09

Posts 16
CT, USA

0 posted 2008-01-10 10:01 PM

That angel in front,
Her beauty lies ever ahead,
Hair shining like gold,
Always kind and ever caring,
Unknowingly breeches these walls,
Meaning love,
But dealing confusion,
She means the best,
A sun within any space.

"There is a beast in man that needs to be excersised, not exorcised."

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-01-10 10:10 PM

Frances,

This is an interesting write. I like it.

Bobby

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-01-10 10:44 PM

beautiful, and true.

A warm welcome to this wonderful site and join us in other forums for fun.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-01-11 12:25 PM

Lovely write, welcome to PIP!

love
Margherita

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