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Open Poetry #41
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JEZZ24
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since 2008-01-10
Posts 11
UK
0 posted 2008-01-10 07:51 PM


You hold me so tightly Im unable to breathe
I need some fresh air and I want you to leave

But you cling to my body and bow at my feet
You tell me you love me, that I make you complete

I look down at your face and into your eyes
Can I forgive you for this and forget all the lies?

Im torn between feelings, do I love? do I hate?
My feelings dont matter, for us its too late
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TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
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1 posted 2008-01-10 10:42 PM

I like this one. no feelings in hiding.

A warm welcome to this wonderful site. and keep writing.   and join us in other forums for fun.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-01-10 11:10 PM

oh I do like this!  Welcome to our pages blue - love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
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3 posted 2008-01-11 11:23 AM

It seems you have clarity!

Nice first post. Welcome to PIP!

margherita

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