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Krawdad
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0 posted 2008-01-09 02:59 PM



Lake ice speaks in cracks
pleading for snow to come
Bring your warm blanket



from the Koyukon "Distant Time"

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2008-01-09 07:32 PM


beautiful
Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-01-09 09:00 PM


Very imaginative. enjoyed.
                      Ida

Frances The Mute
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since 2008-01-09
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3 posted 2008-01-09 10:31 PM


thats gorgeous
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2008-01-10 03:04 AM


sun hides behind clouds
to allow snow to respond
a sweet kiss each flake


love
Margherita

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2008-01-10 05:21 AM


If I was able to stay inside, I would love to see the snow. But, that isn't the case. I have to get out in it everyday. So, no thanks.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2008-01-10 05:48 AM


mmmm.... it would be nice to experience the lake, ice and snow... but for me it's sun, surf and sand at the moment, just the way I like it   I did enjoy this though ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
7 posted 2008-01-13 05:38 PM


I hear that voice outside my window.

A

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