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Sorry Heart. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Such sorrow is casting dark shadows into my heart. Sorry is the hardest word to say, for me it is as easy as the winds of the Dales, where we camped by streams glooping and overflowing into our dreams. Under midnight skies of stars of the deepest blue. So i say sorry, for any hurt, for all of the times we didnt laugh, for letting you down. To return back to those halcyon days of wonder, i have to reach back into my memory, to re-live a part of my life that i will always love, like my next breath. The days of love in warm forests. The passion, laughter, smiles, looks, eyes of darkest heaven, that will never look upon me kindly again, i dont want to have that look from anybody again, while i live now a life that's forever lost. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Oh Phil.. this is a sad write...I'm sending some of my special  hugs to warm your smile... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
EDITED: Py Phils request that I not post nor reply to any of his poetry anymore..request granted. You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-09-2008 06:30 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lost love poems are never easy to read, Phil. I am so sorry that your heart has been bruised. Please wrap yourself in warm healing thoughts, and take each new day one-at-a-time, while holding onto the best of your memories. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
It has been my own experience that both the gain and the loss of the grandest loves fuels the finest poetry... this is an immensely powerful, touching, (both personal and 'universal') write! applause!! |
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Bleeding Ink Junior Member
since 2007-11-12
Posts 31 |
forgiveness is key someone who truely loves...will forgive, because you said you were sorry...  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you for each of your replies..it means a lot to me at the moment.. My most fervent wish is that she can forgive me..and maybe she might say she forgives me too..i would like to be friends..emotions cannot be switched on and off like a light bulb..? Thank you all... Goldenrose. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
An intense, sad but beautiful write born in your forlorn heart. Forgiveness will be granted and you will heal, also by forgiving yourself. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sad stuff here Phil, but there are better days ahead |
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