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Spending Time
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Spending Time |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England 
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Spending Time I’m sitting in a comfy chair with pen poised in my hand, to write a piece of poetry that some may understand. It doesn’t matter what it is or how I choose to rhyme. the purpose of me writing it is just to pass the time. For this is how I meditate and how I free my mind. I’ve tried a dozen different ways but this works well I find. When words come flowing from my pen without a second thought I find myself in harmony with all I ever sought. For many years I’ve juggled with a full and hectic mind, and never found the time to do the things my spirit pined. As poetry is one of them, I don’t care what I say, for writing gives me peace of mind and helps to soothe the day. If you don’t really understand the ramblings that I write, don’t scream and shout about my verse and say that it is trite. For this time I don’t give a damn if you like this or not, this one’s for me, to spend some time, for I’ve not got a lot! Ivor G Davies The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
i liked this... nicely done! poetry certainly is soothing for the soul's mind... /Helen "Ah! my Be-loved, fill the cup that clears |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I write for the same reasons And I am a fan of yours. It's good to see you posting again. I missed you. Alison |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
yes, yes sir. It is true again a good poem to enjoy |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
I don't write to pass the time But more to search my mind I wont write all I think For some of it's unkind I try to be a diplomat Then fall far from the mark I'm going to come Back as a Dog Just wag my tail and Bark Eric Lance Davies |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
A quick, bright read, unapologetic - nice to see something from someone who gets it. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LOL..lovely thoughts...spend time for you my friend!  g |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Thank you all for your comments and support in my selfish pastime! Ivor |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I know you don't care if I like this or not...lol....but I do and I think your time is well spent! *hugs*....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear man, you and I are of the same mind on this! So much so, that I am saving this beauty to add to my "Ivor Collection".  Write on, Poet! Namaste Linda  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I find writing very soothing as well, Ivor and I for one enjoy your way of getting right to the point. Ida |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Hey Ivor with your Pen in hand At least that’s what I think Cause Joan has got her pinny on Stood at the kitchen sink… Time and tide it just wont wait I need to catch your eye Otherwise days will be gone No matter how I try I have a message to pass on From Her in the sky with diamonds Who needs a favour to be done That’s worth much more than gold Grrr the last bit didn’t rhyme Just shows I’m getting old Liar Liar pants on fire the truth havn't told... You all know very well that I am just a kid…… get in touch!! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understood  love the 'matter of fact' way of this |
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