Yes, the moments are there...

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-01-07 06:38 PM

Yes, the moments are there
Fleeting, almost haunting
Each time I close my eyes
Or dare to dream
Or look in your direction
Across the vast expanse
Of oceans, mountains and gravelled roads
That separate heart and soul
And skin on skin and long drawn out nights
And knowing two won't become one

But there are shadows lurking that won't let go
Yes, the moments are definitely there

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (01-09-2008 03:37 AM).]

Clang
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1 posted 2008-01-07 07:53 PM

Wonderful.

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2008-01-07 08:06 PM

very fine!

serious applause!!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-01-07 08:34 PM

thank you Clang - Happy New Year my friend

thank you Bruce - you are a treasure! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-01-08 04:57 AM

Fine writing...James

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-01-08 06:25 AM

ms r & b...I can relate to this one for sure...when I look at the moon and sun though, there is alway hope that someday the touch will come. enjoyed you here

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2008-01-08 08:43 AM

What a beautiful heart-longing write.

passing shadows
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7 posted 2008-01-08 09:28 AM

lurking shadows, yes, I know about those

beautiful writing Roniece!

vandana

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8 posted 2008-01-08 12:14 PM

nice read

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2008-01-08 04:56 PM

thank you all for your wonderful comments to my work...they warm my heart.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2008-01-09 05:39 AM

A wonder write. I do know what it is like to always have those shadows lurking.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia

11 posted 2008-01-09 06:01 AM

thank you sweet Sue... you bless me reading my work

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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12 posted 2008-01-09 09:41 AM

ahh, that sweet longing for "realization of dreams", you express it beautifully, dear Roniece!

Baci,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

13 posted 2008-01-10 05:12 AM

Margherita... I love you reading my work... thank you love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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14 posted 2008-01-13 05:02 PM

I feel this poem

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