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vandana
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0 posted 2008-01-07 06:35 PM




Long Road
It has been a long ride
from home
Where road has taken me
to hide
from there
It has been a long road
to heaven
the ride has been very long
from home
I know
Iam gonna miss this home
But the changes with its life
will bring me happiness
A long ride from home
The sunlight through driving
Shown me a way
A long road



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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-01-08 01:04 PM


This is lovely, dear vandana, I share your positive attitude regarding the change you undergo. You trust that it will bring you happiness and it will most certainly.
It will be worth the long ride.

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2008-01-08 07:14 PM


Wishing you a wonderful journey.
It sounds like you are very very happy now.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-01-08 07:25 PM


Vandana... this is beautiful!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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4 posted 2008-01-13 04:33 PM


vandana, sometimes taking that long road makes us more compassionate and understanding people.  I think you are write the 'beautiful' that is in your heart.

Lovely poem.

Alison

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