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Bleeding Ink
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since 2007-11-12
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0 posted 2007-11-17 02:22 PM



Let me show you love,
give me your password,
so I can check your emails,

Let me show you Love,
don't post any poetry,
don't reply to others,

Let me show you love,
I will pose as you,
post your replys for you,


Oh How I love you,
posting poems about myself,
saying they are from you,

Love, love, love,
make one question,
is it REALLY LOVE?

Control is not love,
love is freedom,
fly and be free.


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-11-18 12:04 PM


Control is not love,
love is freedom,
fly and be free.

Welcome to our blue pages Bleeding Ink.. an interesting first post for you.. you are right... "control is not love" these words are very true.. hope to read more of your work ... I'm sure you will enjoy being among friends here..   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2007-11-18 10:32 PM


Welcome to PIP family,

Get free...I agree with RDB love is not control!

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2007-11-19 10:36 AM


You stated it well.
Welcome.

Alison

Bleeding Ink
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4 posted 2007-11-20 03:09 PM


Thank you for your responses!

I feel welcome here already

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-11-21 12:25 PM



"Control is not love,
love is freedom,
fly and be free."



EA



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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2007-11-21 07:31 PM


Welcome to the blue pages, you will like it here

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SouthernJustice
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since 2007-12-15
Posts 159

7 posted 2008-01-08 11:23 PM


WONDERFUL!
Bleeding Ink
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8 posted 2008-01-08 11:29 PM


thanks to all who have replied.
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
9 posted 2008-01-13 04:48 PM


You know, I think that this poem addresses an important subject.  Control is a dangerous thing to release to another.  There has to be a lot of trust - and I think that too many release information too easily (on line and off line).  There is a reason for passwords - and there is too much danger in having another access accounts that can steal another's indentity.

Sorry to be on a soap box here - but I think this poem deserves more time in the forefront.

A

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