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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-01-07 02:38 PM


Falling In Love with You

Some say I
should have found
a woman that stays
closer to my location
not knowing how close
you stay inside my heart,
whether close or far apart
my love for you is true.

Some say that
considering
our situation
I was a fool
for desiring you
but these words remain true,
I couldn't help falling
in love with you.

"Wise men say
only fools rush in
but I can't help
falling in love
with you."...Elvis

JamesLee
07January
2008




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effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-01-07 02:44 PM


James, another fine write. They can ( and will !) say what they want..As my old Grannie used to say 'If they are talking about me, they are leaving someone else alone' I'll drink to that and let the nee sayers spout all they want, you don't have to listen but you know that already and I'm sure you don't.

Best regards

John

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-01-07 05:47 PM


beautiful James... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

SouthernJustice
Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 159

3 posted 2008-01-08 08:28 AM


always a joy to read you brother. "SJ"
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