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Magnus
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0 posted 2007-12-30 01:23 PM


Sensual,  slow and soft...
the walk of a thousand eyes
riveted to the rise of a breath
held and then finally let go,
exhaling in a delicate fog...
calling her name.

And, though he heard...he
could not know that each
whispered syllable would
draw him toward that which
his hands had not felt,  
that which his eyes could
only see as a shadow
as he followed her into the
night air as a scented
whisper quietly called his
name.

© Copyright 2007 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-12-30 02:07 PM


quit the romantisist, are we not? You bring a smile to an ol woman's face.  

lovely write Barry....she will be honored....

Hugs to you
Lee J.

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2 posted 2007-12-30 02:09 PM


My gosh, it's good to see you writing again...
this was a long time overdue!

Happy New Year, m'friend!


Lincoln
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3 posted 2007-12-30 02:28 PM


enjoyed, lincoln

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2007-12-30 04:00 PM


An image to happily get lost inside!
What a beautiful write!

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2007-12-30 04:07 PM


Magnus~
Oh my gosh ... this is just BEAUTIFUL~
Happy New Year's greetings to you ..
with an inkwell full of thoughts to be shared~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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6 posted 2008-01-06 12:48 PM


You know, this is just silently and captivatingly (is that a word?) beautiful.  It needs to be at the top again.

Alison

Martie
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7 posted 2008-01-06 10:22 AM


Very Barry...this puts a whole new and much better meaning to, "name calling".  Lovely!
ctowen
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8 posted 2008-01-08 04:31 PM


Ha, ha ... I pictured some pretty harsh words by the title,
   content is everything!!!

     Good to read you once more.

Craig

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