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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2008-01-06 05:08 PM


Fingertips
linger
brush against
my
dreams
Angel Wings
linger
caressing
my
bruised heart
Love
distant
trapped
in
Fairy Tales
You
linger
leaving
your footprints
in
my
memories
I yearn
for
your touch
I ache
for a taste
of
freedom
that
can only
be
found
within
your
embrace

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2008 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-01-06 06:00 PM


Angel Wings
linger
caressing
my
bruised heart


... and isn't that a wonderful feeling!

The yearning is felt, dear Kristen!

Lovely write.

Love,
Margherita

ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2008-01-08 04:16 PM


each word seemed to still my thought ....

have been working on a piece of the same title, and just found out how to make the reader linger!!

Thanks!

Craig

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2008-01-13 05:26 PM


Most excellent.

A

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2008-01-13 06:33 PM


Love the new, sassy pic! Now there's a woman who's got a new attitude! ~ and I like it! You look great, Kris!

"Angel Wings
linger
caressing
my
bruised heart"

~ Absolutely divine!

Love to you, Tink
Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2008-01-16 06:05 AM


Kristen... this is beautiful - I hope the lingering feeling stays with you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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