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sarahsong7
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since 2007-12-14
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0 posted 2008-01-06 10:29 AM



I looked up and watched the


Tall shadowy figure with


Coal dark eyes and matching hair


Walking towards me slowly


With that wide smile


Time stood still


As I could not find the strength


To mutter a single word


I was not sure I was even breathing


As he leaned over towards me


Our eyes locked as he


Reached out to take my hand


We greet and say


Our first hello


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2008-01-06 07:13 PM


Nice...nice...nice...though years have passed, I can remember the first days clearly when I met the woman that I love...even though we shared no history, I knew that she was special and I wanted to see her again within those first moments...James
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