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Krawdad
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0 posted 2008-01-05 08:53 PM



Life can seem so grim
when we look down at our feet
see where we have been



010508 ha.


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1 posted 2008-01-05 08:59 PM


Especially if you've just been cleaning out the duck pen. LOL. No, I don't do that anymore, but  remember many times when my boots reeked of powerful smells.  

Krawdad
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2 posted 2008-01-05 09:04 PM


Ha!  And I remember a chicken coop or two!  Cough - wheeze . . .
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-01-05 10:18 PM


What an interesting concept.
You always say so much with a few words.
                                   Ida

dgvarner
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4 posted 2008-01-12 08:20 PM


Ah yes...I've stepped there before....



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Bobby Jordan
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5 posted 2008-01-12 08:52 PM


Krawdad,

Check your boots at the door.

Bobby

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6 posted 2008-01-12 09:00 PM


and ...  when you look down at your feet and
you can't see them for the gut.... (not yours)

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