Open Poetry #41 |
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Our Wish |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England ![]() |
Our Wish If we could wish upon a star and see our wish come true, the only thing we could wish for is what we cannot do. To bring our daughter back to us without her earthly pain for memories now are all we have, since parting was such pain. I know there's other parents who have shared our darkest night, for children never should go first, we should be ‘their’ leading light. Although I speak the mysteries of how mind is born of soul, within our hearts we suffer from a huge big gaping hole. We strive for reassurance that at last we'll meet again, but until then, like others, we just learn to live with pain. Ivor G Davies The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past. |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
Even though I'm not a parent, I can understand the pain you must have gone through... I saw that pain in my parents when they lost a daughter/my sister... my heart goes out to you... know that you will meet again one day. /Helen "Ah! my Be-loved, fill the cup that clears |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
There are many here who share your sorrow. No matter how long ago, we never lose the love. Our daughters/sons live among us but never grow old as we do. It is one small consolation. best to you, Latearrival |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
dear sir, it is very painful to lose a child. Good that there is a promise that you can meet again. beautiful and emotional poem |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful words for your daughter...take care...James |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Hi Ivor Life is a mystery to me. Often you cant tell by looking at someone in the street what they have had to go through because they appear so happy. Then there is the promise of the rewards at the end of the road ??? Heaven Indeed I take other peoples reassurances with a pinch of salt these days..... What is reassuring however is the Happy Times you shared that cant be taken away and the knowledge you did the best you could Eric Lance Davies |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi Ivor, Beautiful tribute to your daughter. I hope to be able to do that someday but not now. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The loss of one's child, is a pain like no other. Yes, a huge gaping hole is left and nothing can ever fill it. I am truly sorry for the loss of your daughter. The pain never truly goes away. However, it does change in shape and size and the edges become less jagged. My sister lost a daughter and then a son and the sadness still lingers. Giving you a loving, compassionate hug, Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
That is a very painful thing I bet MERRY CHRISTMAS ARCTIC WIND |
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