Open Poetry #41 |
Season of Love |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I plaster pain's number all over the bathroom stall I rip your words to pieces Discard your name down the drain I'm going to get from point A to point B eventually It isn't always going to be this hard You aren't always going to be on my mind You aren't always going to control my dreams God has a plan for both you and me Sometimes I understand and sometimes I don't I gotta get over You completely Sometimes I just want to hang on but that only makes it more difficult to receive what God has in store Sometimes I just want to get rid of you but that makes me feel confused I'm not supposed to question and ask Why I have to remind myself that things would never have changed You would still be you and I would no longer be me The tears still scar my heart I know it's not permanent I wasn't happy anyway You were a season of love Not a lifetime If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
and I would no longer be me too many compromises aren't a good solution. I love your thoughts, dear Kristen. There is strength in this piece. Well done. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Remarkable ending....enjoyed it all. Love can be such a frustration. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed the thoughts here... "You were a season of love." I believe that relationships always have a beginning and an ending...ever if a young couple were to fall in love and marry at 18, and enjoy perhaps 60 years of wedded bliss, one would pass away before the other and the relationship would end...but that would be the ultimate blessing for them, to have enjoyed so many years of companionship and love...this is life...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I have to remind myself that things would never have changed You would still be you and I would no longer be me The tears still scar my heart I know it's not permanent I wasn't happy anyway You were a season of love Not a lifetime oh this is heartwrenching Kristen... you have expressed your pain in words that I know all too well... this too will pass.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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