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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2007-07-29 12:44 PM

To live, to breath...to smell the rose again,
that I might feel the tremor of thy heart.
For is thy soul upon the ragged sigh that binds
me to thee.  And in thy binding...thy eyes shall
reflect mine own...and in that moment,  that single
moment...thee shalt love me no less than I shalt
lingering..savoring,  love you.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2007-07-29 03:50 PM

Wow!!

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

2 posted 2007-07-29 03:54 PM

You'll rope someones heart with this one

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2007-07-29 03:55 PM

Barry, Barry, Barry~~~ you know the words to a "girl's" heart

M

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2007-07-29 04:02 PM

Thanx to all! A brief bit of passionate
penning...that shall wane and fall back to
sleep again...until the dawn awakes....

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2007-07-29 04:05 PM

TD said it with one word. "WOW!"
But I will add an "amazing" because that is what this is!

Patricia

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

6 posted 2007-07-29 07:23 PM

Magnus, a beautiful write here my friend, you express your feelings well and I so enjoyed, looks like the muse is back.

Rick

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2007-07-29 07:28 PM

ohhh so soft and lovely. And soooo good to see you penning again m'friend!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2007-07-30 12:50 PM

Barry....you make the word, "swoon", seem correct.

BBGrrl
Member

since 2007-07-17

Posts 181
BC, Canada

9 posted 2007-07-30 01:23 PM

Methinks thou hast been visited by the Bard, Magnus.

I enjoyed this.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2007-08-01 05:29 AM

Very nice...James

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

11 posted 2007-08-01 06:24 AM

Any woman would definately melt if they were the recipient of this poem Barry ... just lovely. Much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2007-08-01 12:25 PM

good read

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

13 posted 2007-08-02 08:19 AM

wow~~~
this is lovely~

~beLLe

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2007-08-07 11:22 AM

thy eyes shall
reflect mine own...and in that moment, that single
moment...

Oh, yes.... So very lovely! *S*

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