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Irish
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since 2006-05-02

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Ft Benning

0 posted 2007-12-30 03:50 PM

I'm fresh to this bathroom
with it's clean commode
and flushed out drains.
One can not help but admire
the functionality
of his personals,
orderly upon the shelf.
There are few hints
that others have shared
this close space.
But today as I look
into his mirror
I notice a retort of red
smudging the corner
in his reflection.
Do I attempt to wipe
the image away,
giving him a better view ?
I ready a kiss instead,
for his sweet mouth,
pressing upon him
that not all lipsticks smear
and leave messy stains .

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2007-12-30 03:57 PM

My my my, but you do have a way...

smiling here

brains, beauty and talent.

I'm gonna go hide under a rock.

There. A non-smudgy kiss for you too.

Irish
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since 2006-05-02

Posts 50
Ft Benning

2 posted 2007-12-30 04:06 PM

LOL !

I doubt he's too thrilled being compared to a potty

but he's a sparkly one ! lol

I came across a vengeful little piece of poetry yesterday and he the target .

I was annoyed

and you know what I am like when I am annoyed lol

Thank you

kisses you right back
Este Lauder Baby !

yeah right... lol

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2007-12-30 06:30 PM

This is great!!!!
Definitely drumrolls and a welcome mat for you.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2007-12-30 08:10 PM

Most excellent....much enjoyed.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

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Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-12-30 08:30 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Irish
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since 2006-05-02

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Ft Benning

6 posted 2007-12-30 09:32 PM

I thank you all for reading me very much

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

7 posted 2007-12-31 06:43 AM

heck,..an artist just repaints
the used canvas...nice work here irish

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2007-12-31 06:47 AM

Bravo....Enjoyed this!

Irish
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since 2006-05-02

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Ft Benning

9 posted 2007-12-31 07:23 AM

Thank you DS and Lee

lol yeah....

I paint on him all the time

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

10 posted 2007-12-31 08:40 AM

I keep coming back to this poem. Must mean I like it lots, huh.

I do. Like it lots.

Alison

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2007-12-31 01:04 PM

Quite a scene you paint here and I would add that you give a lesson or two too!

Agreeably brainy stuff!

Love,
Margherita

Irish
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since 2006-05-02

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Ft Benning

12 posted 2007-12-31 03:42 PM

thank you both

I appreciate the read.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2008-01-01 07:27 AM

Nice...James

Irish
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since 2006-05-02

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Ft Benning

14 posted 2008-01-01 01:17 PM

thank you James

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

15 posted 2008-01-02 05:18 PM

I love this, Irish! Love it!

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