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Open Poetry #41

Light and darkness alike

kudanesh
Member

since 2007-12-01

Posts 135
Peterborough,England

0 posted 2008-01-11 11:11 PM

Light and darkness alike

Light and darkness are seemly entwined
Light can blind you and in darkness you are blind
It the light you mind sees colours and shapes
In the darkness your imagination starts to takes place
Can you see what I see when looking at this
Spend so much in the dark and the light you wont miss

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-01-12 12:03 PM

Dear Kudanesh, this is so true!! The power of our minds!
Very well rendered.

love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-01-12 03:02 PM

"Light can blind you and in darkness you are blind." Love this. You are getting better with your writing, kundanesh, keep working at it. I think you have much to offer.
Ida

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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3 posted 2008-01-12 03:04 PM

good write here

so true!

well done Andrew

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