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if my sight shall know |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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if my sight shall know that last saved December shall speak for itself I’ve decided to be the centerfold of your dreams your wants, your desires to rant and rave a dialogue of sexual consistency claiming liberal biased based on your sighs which confuses our interesting experience such scriptural allusions we make do we not? and…. where thou shall take my hand dictating our sense of democracy unexamined assumptions coupled with objectives we have yet to find… you believe that we have failed oh my darling quite contrary I propose that our failures are wide arrays of music still yet to compose deciphering unique personal journeys that we are simply redefining as ours for I’ve tasted your desires… and felt your deepest secrets impossible these wings of God yet attainable I softly touch your lips your mouth the wildness in your eyes of want.... come back... and softly whisper to my soul what your willing ness can’t yet, perceive what we are where light learns it’s dreams & delusions become who we are together embracing wild love despite the allure of moon glow we are born to the eyes of good byes… forever’s whisper pray for the world my love that they may be despairing at the foot of life in all it’s glory, where fore morning shivers in the evening of our souls…. a fool’s gold and we know where tenderness curls |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
we are born to the eyes of good byes… forever’s whisper ~*~ This is but one of the many lines which likes me so well... Thank you for this... Happy New Year, LeeJ!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You do know how and what to write.... Well done Leej. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ 'and we know where tenderness curls' .... oh, yes indeed, indeed~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Irish Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 50Ft Benning |
and this is how the big girls do it  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~sigh~such a passionate write! beautifully done, LeeJ. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully written ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Impressive, gorgeous words!! You always amaze me. Love and Happy New Year! Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ - This is simply awesome and beautiful, so very beautiful. My best to you for 2008! And, yes, you are still "amazing"!  Helen |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What brilliance shines within these words... "come back... and softly whisper to my soul what your willing ness can’t yet, perceive what we are where light learns it’s dreams & delusions become who we are together"... An almost sacred sound to the readers heart. Happy new year LeeJ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Your passion has wings, LeeJ. This is an incredible write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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