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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2007-12-28 04:15 AM

I do not know when it was
I first loved you
I only know the beating of my heart
told me it was so
And now after all these years
my heart is telling me a different thing
It needs to try and learn to beat again
without you

I only know that my heart beats because of you
I only know that my heart is you

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (12-28-2007 05:34 AM).]

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-12-28 05:35 AM

So lovely

We are always learning and knowing that we need to learn. This poem is a beautiful reminder of the best part of you, Roniece, - your heart. And it also sings out about the changes we all encounter.

So lovely

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-12-28 05:48 AM

thank you my lovely girl Ali.. you are also so encouraging of my work...I am of course in awe of yours... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2007-12-28 06:38 AM

ms R & B..someone is lucky here...enjoyed this exposing of your thoughts and feelings..

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2007-12-28 06:46 AM

thank you Mr Daark... appreciate your comment. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2007-12-28 07:37 AM

It needs to try and learn to beat again
without you

a very hard thing to learn~~

M

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2007-12-28 11:55 AM

I only know that my heart is you

A very beautiful way to express the wonderful feeling/truth of oneness, dear Roniece.

We live from love, there is no way out, except when we get lost in the illusion of being separate.

Enjoyed your heartfelt words very much.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2007-12-28 05:42 PM

good read

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-12-29 02:21 AM

Wonderful...even when those we love go away, the love stays...only when they tell us they don't want our love anymore, will we have the strength to redirect our love...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2007-12-29 03:50 AM

Thank you Maureen, Margherita, Vandana and James - I appreciate your wonderful comments to my work... Happy New Year! love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

10 posted 2007-12-29 06:06 AM

Heartfelt write, RDB!

"It needs to try and learn to beat again
without you"

Yes, it does seem as if the heart has stopped beating but I think it works pretty much how James said and it will eventually find a different beat.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

11 posted 2007-12-29 04:36 PM

powerfully emotive 'personal' [and yet, likely
a "slice of most everyperson's-life dejavu"
these days, I'm afraid] write!

applause!!

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