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Driftwood Beach Sunset
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Driftwood Beach Sunset |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Driftwood Beach Sunset While misty-magenta mountains rest, A lovely driftwood beach-silhouette frames a small ship skimming the far horizon in one last saffron sunburst, just before soft twilight sweeps across a grand teal sea, where gentle milky-blue waves foam ‘round fine-sculpted rocks. On smooth silver sand… a lone seabird and time walk together. |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Very good piece. I love the images. |
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Berenice Junior Member
since 2007-07-18
Posts 18 |
Ah, the beauty took my breath away. most fine write! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sigh....you had me from the title, your images and emotion....throughout the piece....just pure poetry! pure poetry!!  ~~**~~ |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
The beauty of this scene is enhanced by the choreography with which you've constructed it. You draw the eye in a crescent from the mountains to the beach, outward to the ship and the horizon, then back to us on shore, ending with the ephemeral: "a lone seabird and time walk together." Beautifully done, and the patinas are exquisite. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"On smooth silver sand… a lone seabird and time walk together." made me stop and sit awhile poet |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Hi Bruce, Very Good Bobby |
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