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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Your skies The huge moon halo beckons me like a rainbow breath of Universe to come dance within your skies of scintillating gossamer dreams. On my way I will pluck all the clouds keeping me from viewing your light, hiding the doors to your secret rooms, where your arms will hold me tight. Snatches of melodies tickle my ears spot lights roam across the dark night, the sky then opens its center window where I welcome the smile of your soul. I understand I have reached my goal, for there is nothing that touches me more than your love-intoxicated yearning eyes and the way you have of taking me home.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o those skies!!! when we open our eyes splendor in the view merry christmas to you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
GORGEOUS write! Into my library, quick as a wink. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Inspired cosmic love letters... I especially liked plucking the clouds that hid your view... what a beautiful vision you have painted. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, yes, Margherita, the "smile of a soul" is indeed a most beautiful sight. Your writes are always so full of love that they truly inspire!  Helen |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I feel God when I read this. What beautiful feelings this stirs within me! Love, Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marvelous Margrit Margherita ~ Divine poetess, you are a child of the moon, the sun, and the stars.  Your cosmic poetry always touches my soul ~ and my heart.  With much love, Linda  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"the sky then opens its center window where I welcome the smile of your soul" This is just heavenly.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A wonderful flow of thoughts...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear Poet friends for the kind and generous replies. I am happy you enjoyed the poem. Love and Joy. Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Interesting ‘write!’: I am particularly fond of: “The huge moon halo beckons me like a rainbow breath of Universe to come dance within your skies of scintillating gossamer dreams.”; AND: “…the way you have of taking me home” Applause! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I came to this fine 'write' again to see once more that grand moon and roof of stars! continued applause! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Oh my Lady.....BRAVO!!! A very languid write filled with imagry....brilliant...thank you for sharing |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita! This is a lovely poem! Very beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ How in the world this one slipped by me is a mystery~ OH MY ! Firstly ... you KNOW I love the graphic~ Nextly ... love, love, love the penning~ You are magic~ I am SO GLAD that this came 'round again~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
On my way I will pluck all the clouds keeping me from viewing your light, hiding the doors to your secret rooms, where your arms will hold me tight. Lovely, Margherita. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Poet friends for telling me you enjoyed this one! Love and Happy New Year! Margherita |
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