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Margherita
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0 posted 2007-12-26 11:13 AM






Your skies
The huge moon halo beckons me
like a rainbow breath of Universe
to come dance within your skies
of scintillating gossamer dreams.

On my way I will pluck all the clouds
keeping me from viewing your light,
hiding the doors to your secret rooms,
where your arms will hold me tight.

Snatches of melodies tickle my ears
spot lights roam across the dark night,
the sky then opens its center window
where I welcome the smile of your soul.

I understand I have reached my goal,
for there is nothing that touches me more
than your love-intoxicated yearning eyes
and the way you have of taking me home.





© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2007-12-26 11:17 AM


o those skies!!!
when we open our eyes
splendor in the view

merry christmas to you

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2 posted 2007-12-26 11:20 AM


GORGEOUS write!
Into my library, quick as a wink.

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2007-12-26 12:52 PM


Inspired cosmic love letters...
I especially liked plucking the clouds that hid your view...
what a beautiful vision you have painted.

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2007-12-26 03:36 PM


Oh, yes, Margherita, the "smile of a soul" is indeed a most beautiful sight.  Your writes are always so full of love that they truly inspire!

Helen

Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2007-12-26 04:07 PM


I feel God when I read this.  What beautiful feelings this stirs within me!

Love,

Kristen

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6 posted 2007-12-26 05:13 PM


Marvelous Margrit Margherita ~

Divine poetess, you are a child of the moon, the sun, and the stars.

Your cosmic poetry always touches my soul ~ and my heart.

With much love,

Linda

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7 posted 2007-12-26 05:21 PM


"the sky then opens its center window
where I welcome the smile of your soul"

This is just heavenly....

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-12-27 02:40 AM


A wonderful flow of thoughts...James
Margherita
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9 posted 2007-12-29 06:01 AM


Thank you all my dear Poet friends for the kind and generous replies. I am happy you enjoyed the poem.

Love and Joy.
Margherita

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10 posted 2007-12-29 05:56 PM


Interesting ‘write!’:

I am particularly fond of:

“The huge moon halo beckons me
like a rainbow breath of Universe
to come dance within your skies
of scintillating gossamer dreams.”;

AND:

“…the way you have of taking me home”

Applause!

secondhanddreampoet
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11 posted 2007-12-30 07:15 PM


I came to this fine 'write' again to see once
more that grand moon and roof of stars!

continued applause!

LeeJ
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12 posted 2007-12-30 07:56 PM


Oh my Lady.....BRAVO!!!  A very languid write filled with imagry....brilliant...thank you for sharing

Artic Wind
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13 posted 2007-12-30 08:36 PM


Margherita!

This is a lovely poem!

Very beautiful

ARCTIC WIND

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14 posted 2007-12-31 08:54 AM


Margherita~
How in the world this one slipped by me is a mystery~

OH MY !

Firstly ... you KNOW I love the graphic~
Nextly ... love, love, love the penning~
You are magic~

I am SO GLAD that this came 'round again~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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15 posted 2007-12-31 10:20 AM


On my way I will pluck all the clouds
keeping me from viewing your light,
hiding the doors to your secret rooms,
where your arms will hold me tight.


Lovely, Margherita.  

Alison

Margherita
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16 posted 2007-12-31 01:13 PM


Thank you, dear Poet friends for telling me you enjoyed this one!

Love and Happy New Year!
Margherita

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