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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-12-25 08:49 PM


Kiss My Blues Away

My honeys hair is perfect for her
the way it softly caresses her neck,
the way it flips and curls
creating a lovely visual effect.
She's quite fond of Starbucks coffee
much the way I'm fond of her,
she sips it down slow and sensually
enjoying every drop I'm sure.
One time when I kissed her on the lips
her lips seemed to melt into mine,
another time I told her that she looked
like a model; slender, sleek and refined.
Everyday I think about her
though she's very far away,
soon she'll board a plane from Chicago
to come and kiss my blues away.

JamesLee
24December
2007
Written on United Flight 934
from Honolulu to Los Angeles.



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TomMark
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1 posted 2007-12-25 11:40 PM


Good. Passing Los Angeles? I shall wave a hello.
Tom

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-12-26 06:30 AM


... so then it was the other way around!
So lovely, your blues is healed then.

Love and Joy.
Margherita

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-12-27 02:21 AM


Thankl you Tom Mark and Margherita for the wonderful responses...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-12-28 03:14 AM


ah James.. a lovely write. and written on my birthday nonetheless!   enjoyed my friend RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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5 posted 2007-12-28 05:37 AM


Beautiful - and the taste of Starbucks lingers on your lips now, James?  She sounds lovely.

Alison

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-12-29 02:19 AM


Thank you Roniece and aziza for the wonderful responses...and happy birthday
Roniece...I sent my honey a sweatshirt with a hood and a Starbucks gift card today...its snowing in Chicago...good thing she'll be visiting me in Hawaii soon...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-12-29 02:47 AM


ooh so that means we will be honoured with more of your wonderful writes about your love - can't wait till she visits you too James!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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