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lady eyes samba |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it was another man's tuesday morning walking his lovely in public and you were distant in your proper with polite but a look back too from under burly girl hair whispering a smile with no strings recognition of recognition with some unravel here and there taller than I knew you to be stepping on elegant tiptoes I heard the parking lot chuckle reading my mind was too easy but it didn't say much as you blessed lines with shadows and steps that could have been music I wondered of the songs in your mind would you have sung them out loud if my guitar was in tune and the strum of my hands kept a comfortable tempo playing lady eyes samba smooth __________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"whispering a smile with no strings recognition of recognition with some unravel here and there"  loved this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe...merry C day |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I wondered of the songs in your mind would you have sung them out loud if my guitar was in tune and the strum of my hands kept a comfortable tempo playing lady eyes samba smooth You bless us with unforgettable tunes, dear D. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend for your eyes and sounds too |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"I heard the parking lot chuckle reading my mind was too easy but it didn't say much as you blessed lines with shadows and steps that could have been music" love your mind, D M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
D This is beautifully special. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
well I do like to sing Mr Daark.. I do like your words RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs..thanks babe for watching this unravel _____________ ms az, thank you lady for the eyes and thoughts _______________ ms R & B, thank you for the read and touch ms |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you have a beautiful heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you make smiles, yanno??  hugs big d. |
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Irish Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 50Ft Benning |
Your craftmanship is excellent . This is erotic in it's subtlety and superb in thought . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky, thanks my friend for your eyes here. ______________ ms gs, thanks babe for touching the sides of this _______________ ms irish, humble thanks to you for your read |
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