Open Poetry #41 |
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Dream Dancers |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
What dreams lie locked inside your head, what treasures hide ‘neath midnight’s bed? When owls screech and whales breach, what dreams reside just out of reach? When spirits dance in sunshine’s glow, they chase dark wolves that cowered low. Release them, let them reveal your inner stamp, your golden seal. Let go the thoughts, escape the lair, free your dream dancers to roam without care. Be not tight fisted, be not restrained, to hold dreams too tightly is to be constrained. What dreams lie locked inside your head, what treasures need releasing from midnight’s bed? Release them, let them reveal your inner stamp, your golden seal. |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Very nice piece. I enjoyed this. Type II poet. Its worth the work. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like this very much, Kacy, but then I just love anything you write. Ida |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"What dreams lie locked inside your head, what treasures hide ‘neath midnight’s bed? When owls screech and whales breach, what dreams reside just out of reach? When spirits dance in sunshine’s glow, they chase dark wolves that cowered low. Release them, let them reveal your inner stamp, your golden seal." beautifully penned, Kacy... Happy Holidays to you and yours... ![]() "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
would that fine words like these (or philosophic/poetic 'light' of any sort) could truly dispel the ever-multiplying 'dark wolves' of individual and collective humanity!...however... applause for this 'write!' and the very talented author (and most fine human being) who penned it! |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Marvelous! |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
This is very affirming. Nicely done. Merry Christmas sweet lady and may all your dreams come true. Wish your precious daughter Merry Christmas from Larry C. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This sounds like a prayer, which I hope is answered. Beautifully written, Midnitesun! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful. and dear lady, you go philosophical. ![]() Merry Christmas to you!!!! and have a happy day. ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
free your dream dancers to roam without care. Every now and then we need just do to what you so beautifully recommend here, dear Kacy. I think the moment has come, it's past midnight too ... Love and Joy. Margherita ![]() |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I love this image: "free your dream dancers to roam without care" Sometimes they have to dance with the wolves in order to be free. Thanks for the wonderfully written reminder. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very interesting! continued applause!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Know what? I am loving this poem so much. Yes, you hit me square in the solar plexus. It's tucked in my library to savor. Alison |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A fine, fine poem Ma'am hoping your New (and improved) Year is all it should be |
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