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Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2007-12-22 05:54 PM




Okay I thought that would be my last post for now
but I still have this other thing
on my mind and in my heart ...

But why does she love me like that? ...
She does that almost every Sunday; Karen in church.
She is the office administrator,
surely she must be quite busy in there.
Nobody else does that ...
Yet, in the middle of the service, She comes out of the office
to find me in the room where I am listening,
and without even asking,
she gives me her hugs and extended back rub treatment!
As minutes pass, and the sermon drones on and on,
she does my neck first;
then she does my shoulders, then my arms.
minutes pass, and then she does my back,
up and down, and back and forth;
she magically kneads away
all the accumulated pint-up tensions
of a not-so-good and hectic week.
And more minutes pass, and I wonder:
is all her office work really done? ...
Then she works down to my lower spine,
as though she meant to carry me away with her,
as though I were not sitting in a chair,
round and round, and up and down, and back and forth;
my head so closely resting
on her full and ample breasts.
What a wonderful solace she is,
how she makes up
for all the pain and awful, of the previous week.
And sometimes, when this lush goddess
of generosity and compassion takes me in her arms,
(quite suddenly and for no apparent reason)
as if to pull me off the chair I'm sitting in,
I have even blurted out:
Thank you, I really, really needed that this week ...
But I wonder: why me? ... and when there's work to do?
What have I done to deserve,
to receive her luscious and deliciousness
without even asking for it?
I dare not ask her why, cuz that would spoil the fun.
I don't know anyone here
of whom I can ask: give me hugs and back rubs,
because they might be busy, like at work ...
Would I be allowed to reciprocate and give her one as well? ..
To hear her whisper into my badly damaged ear:
Jaime, come here and love me again ...
the way you did the other day ...
because it has been such a bad week for me.
Come and hug and love me again.
Please knead my shoulders and my back
and massage and knead my breasts? ..
Would it be okay if we? ...
Is it okay?  Do you have time? ...
Can we ... Could we ...Is it okay? ...
Rub me ... Love me ...
Please ...
Please ...
Please ...

(but that is just a fantasy)
Southern Cross


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Margherita
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1 posted 2007-12-22 06:15 PM


Sending you a big tender hug, dear Jaime, across the world. Feel the warmth expand within your heart.
This is such a tender write and it touched me deeply.

Love and Merry Christmas!
Margherita

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable
2 posted 2007-12-22 06:48 PM


Thank you Margh, because I really kneaded it this week ... and it's okay? ... It is really okay? ... we really can!!!!
luscious delicious massaging kneading hugs
Jaime

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2007-12-22 07:59 PM


Yes, dear Jaime, it is ok!!
We all need hugs of love, it's one of the most beautiful gifts we can give and receive.

Love,
Margherita


aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
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4 posted 2007-12-22 11:04 PM


Jaime,

I think this is the very best of you.  It is poignant, honest and very real.  I send you thoughts and hugs,

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2007-12-23 01:57 AM


Jaime.... I'm sending you some of my   hugs to smile your day... this was lovely .. Merry Christmas my friend..
RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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