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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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so seen by those who saw in which the ignorant capitulate but I wouldn't suggest dismissing time what life intends for reaching though there wasn't much to find a lot of words stripped of their very meaning I was ready to dismiss them the moment they fell t h r o u g h the fissure sadly though I never got an opportunity the most that I was seriously able to ascertain was but a momentary passing on the limerick w i n d of breath |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Dale....Words are so tricky...they play among the patterns of the mind and pinch the heart; then by the time the pen is ready, sometimes depart. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is the very place I've been for a year and a half now, and both the main reason I've been gone from here and, now that it's fading, the reason I'm back (other than the fact that I've missed my friends here). Gosh, you say it well! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Martie took the words right out of my keyboard! lol Dale, your poems are works of art ~ literally. After enjoying the artistic presentations, I then get into the meat and potatoes of the write!  Linda |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
one of the most arrogant notions of language is we know what we are talking about |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
And that other's think alike and understand what we are saying! Jim Aitken |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Mysteriously beautiful ... elegant in presentation no doubt ... I guess that a momentary passing can originate a really good limerick! Don't freeze up there! Love, Margherita  |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Martie, when the pen is ready... I like my words to roll off like maple syrup... I'm hooked on a feelin' Am I a junkie..? I hope I don't get written off to soon... Well Ed, seems you and I were doing the same thing... Sometimes gettin' away from it is just what it takes. Nice to see you again... Linda your gonna have to stop talking about food I've run out of snacks. thank a you girl... I guess so-called flaws augment our soul's mystique... thanks Jim It's plenty cold up here Margherita but I'm not freezing I don't think... thank you all dale [This message has been edited by lucky (12-23-2007 03:48 AM).] |
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