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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The broken ice Heaves and laps Along the snowy shore Summer cabins With windows boarded up Seem as stoic monuments To that other time On the cliff above Wind shushes through The dark pine groves While leafless birches Creak a little and then Are still The sound Of no one at the door I hope it’s not too cold Wherever you are Take care . |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I miss birches....but I do not miss the sound of no one at the door. What an excellent image! You have a gift, for images that touch the soul. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
yes...grand-fine imagery!: "Summer cabins With windows boarded up ...stoic monuments To that other time..." and particularly: Wind...through ...dark pine groves ...leafless birches Creak a little and then Are still The sound Of no one at the door" superb! [sustained applause!!] |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
John Thank you. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John... this is very beautiful! Merry Christmas to you my friend love RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The holidays seem to bring us deep thoughts and lovely memories. Well done , John. Ida |
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