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Open Poetry #41

Orpheus

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-12-19 09:32 PM

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Sleep
For there is nothing
Worth your waking

I will be here
Meanwhile
Laying flowers
On your bed

Dream
Of us together
When we were young

I am coming home
Though I don’t know when

Yet my love
It will be soon

.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2007-12-19 09:55 PM

I got chills.
Sitting in my basement, in my winter coat, completely bundled up against the Ohio cold, and I got chills.

Amazed.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2007-12-19 10:14 PM

Stunning, very touching.
Ida

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2007-12-20 03:13 PM

If death were such beautiful and romantic event, I would die now.

My friend is dying and she struggles day by day in great pain for her husband to gradually accept the fact. It was only 50 days that she got the too late to operate cancer. Her cancer suffering husband is thinking *** which made her sighed to my other friend that this year, there would be three funerals.( Her father in-law passed away last month)

You know, dear John, your poem is beautiful, a flower to the dying branch. But for the sadness and the real bonding of love in reality, are there any words can describe?

very beautiful poem!!!
have a wonderful day, John.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2007-12-20 06:16 PM

Touching write.

love,
Margherita

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