Open Poetry #41 |
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Winter's Canvas |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... ![]() |
~*Winter's Canvas*~ The days grow short and Christmas rounds the bend As Old Man Winter dons his robe of white Lone chipmunk scurries gathering his feast While year's last robin finally heads south With nightfall, moon appears in perfect shine Casts eerie glow 'pon nature's work of art Frail branches bent 'neath weight of winter's shawl Play shadows 'cross the rooftops down below The scent of chimneys' exhale fills the air As streetlamps spotlight snowflake pirouettes A distant carol warms a chilling heart While icicles cling bravely to the eves In silence now the world lies fast asleep Awaiting gentle nudge of morning light When Sun with fingers warm shall tease the earth And brush a shimmer 'cross the icy ground 'Tis Mother Nature's masterpiece in play A nightly curtain call for those before ~Vicky L. Raynes *Repost in the absence of my muse... ___________________________ "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing "In silence now the world lies fast asleep Awaiting gentle nudge of morning light When Sun with fingers warm shall tease the earth And brush a shimmer 'cross the icy ground 'Tis Mother Nature's masterpiece in play A nightly curtain call for those before" I actually love Winter especially when it snows and the world seems to stand still. * nice to read your words again...been too long~~ ![]() ![]() M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() I've missed your fine style and imagery. Please, feel free to repost more of yesterday's beauties while the muse is sleeping! If it was worth a read once? it will be worth multiple readings!!! Happy winter to you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It is so good to see you again Vicky, and thank you so much for sharing the beauty of your verse. How lovely this is! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Love this... I cannot write sonnet...too many rules and rhyme...lol This is brilliant! re-post some more! I have an idea...you write me a book, and I'll write you one...!! yes?? ![]() lv,g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Repost anytime, m'friend! It is so good to see you! ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As streetlamps spotlight snowflake pirouettes Something magical to behold and to never forget! Truly magical poem! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ms Vicky is back! Perhaps the reposting of this beautifully word-painted winter canvass, will nudge your muse back from her extended vacation! Here's hoping! ![]() Virtually every line conjured up beautiful images and sensations ~ and memories. ![]() Linda P.S. Don't be such a stranger! You, your poetry, ~ and your missing muse ~ have been missed! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hi everyone... thanks so much for the kind words... I appreciate it more than you know... I hope you all have a wonderful holiday (whichever, if any, that you celebrate) love and hugs to all... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Happy holidays, Vicky. I'm happy to see this write again! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Nice to see you in my mailbox .. and here in the PiP Circle of Friends~ Merry Christmas to you and yours~ Give Randy a Christmas *Huglet* too~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Me ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's nice to read your words again, Vicky - A smiling Merry Christmas to you.. ![]() |
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