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vlraynes
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0 posted 2007-12-18 04:05 AM



~*Winter's Canvas*~

The days grow short and Christmas rounds the bend
As Old Man Winter dons his robe of white
Lone chipmunk scurries gathering his feast
While year's last robin finally heads south

With nightfall, moon appears in perfect shine
Casts eerie glow 'pon nature's work of art
Frail branches bent 'neath weight of winter's shawl
Play shadows 'cross the rooftops down below

The scent of chimneys' exhale fills the air
As streetlamps spotlight snowflake pirouettes
A distant carol warms a chilling heart
While icicles cling bravely to the eves

In silence now the world lies fast asleep
Awaiting gentle nudge of morning light
When Sun with fingers warm shall tease the earth
And brush a shimmer 'cross the icy ground

'Tis Mother Nature's masterpiece in play
A nightly curtain call for those before


~Vicky L. Raynes


*Repost in the absence of my muse...
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"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

© Copyright 2007 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2007-12-18 06:43 AM


lovely writing

"In silence now the world lies fast asleep
Awaiting gentle nudge of morning light
When Sun with fingers warm shall tease the earth
And brush a shimmer 'cross the icy ground

'Tis Mother Nature's masterpiece in play
A nightly curtain call for those before"

I actually love Winter especially when it snows and the world seems to stand still.
* nice to read your words again...been too long~~


M


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2 posted 2007-12-18 06:59 AM


Enjoyed...James
Midnitesun
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3 posted 2007-12-18 07:02 AM


What a wonderful treat!
I've missed your fine style and imagery.
Please, feel free to repost more of yesterday's beauties while the muse is sleeping! If it was worth a read once? it will be worth multiple readings!!!
Happy winter to you.

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2007-12-18 07:29 AM


It is so good to see you again Vicky, and thank you so much for sharing the beauty of your verse.  How lovely this is!
dgvarner
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5 posted 2007-12-18 09:19 AM


Love this...

I cannot write sonnet...too many rules and rhyme...lol  This is brilliant!  

re-post some more!

I have an idea...you write me a book, and I'll write you one...!!  yes??  

lv,g

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Sunshine
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6 posted 2007-12-18 12:09 PM


Repost anytime, m'friend!
It is so good to see you!




vandana
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7 posted 2007-12-18 12:10 PM


nice read
Margherita
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8 posted 2007-12-18 06:32 PM


As streetlamps spotlight snowflake pirouettes

Something magical to behold and to never forget!

Truly magical poem!

Love,
Margherita

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9 posted 2007-12-18 06:40 PM


Ms Vicky is back! Perhaps the reposting of this beautifully word-painted winter canvass, will nudge your muse back from her extended vacation! Here's hoping!

Virtually every line conjured up beautiful images and sensations ~ and memories.


Linda

P.S. Don't be such a stranger! You, your poetry, ~ and your missing muse ~ have been missed!


vlraynes
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10 posted 2007-12-25 04:43 AM


Hi everyone...

thanks so much for the kind words...

I appreciate it more than you know...

I hope you all have a wonderful holiday
(whichever, if any, that you celebrate)

love and hugs to all...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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11 posted 2007-12-25 11:30 AM


Happy holidays, Vicky.
I'm happy to see this write again!

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2007-12-25 11:38 AM


Vicky~
Nice to see you in my mailbox ..
and here in the PiP Circle of Friends~

Merry Christmas to you and yours~
Give Randy a Christmas *Huglet* too~

*Huglets*
~*Me

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com     

Nan
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13 posted 2007-12-25 07:01 PM


It's nice to read your words again, Vicky - A smiling Merry Christmas to you..


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