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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-12-17 06:27 AM


at the edge of your love words
there were wrinkles hidden
like smile sided memories
waiting to be played again

you left winter in the boxes
outside your sweet dream windows
for the summer fairy's stealing
and occasional replacement maybe

with something for your core
to make the volcanoes happen
before I could know your mountains
against some morning's horizon

your fingers were ice on my eyes


__________

daark


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-12-17 06:31 AM


oui daccord... very nice Mr Daark.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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with you
2 posted 2007-12-17 08:22 AM


"at the edge of your love words
there were wrinkles hidden
like smile sided memories
waiting to be played again"

much enjoyed D

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-17 06:24 PM


Lovely Dark

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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4 posted 2007-12-17 06:59 PM


with something for your core
to make the volcanoes happen
before I could know your mountains
against some morning's horizon

your fingers were ice on my eyes


Spellbinding words!

Love,
margherita

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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5 posted 2007-12-18 12:56 PM


you left winter in the boxes
outside your sweet dream windows
for the summer fairy's stealing
and occasional replacement maybe


smiles

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2007-12-18 06:23 AM


ms R & B, thanks lady friend

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ms suesea, thank you for looking in the windows   ms

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artic wind, thank you for the touch

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ms mar, thanks hon for the time at this penspatter

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ms az, thank you little one for warming my eyes with the smile

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