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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-12-16 07:10 AM

Once was there to share not quarrel
Love returned, his way
Acceptance from the teenaged years
A mutual love gone astray

Unfaithfulness, in past, his need
Reversal of once held deep
Today a minus of mathematical term
Each in aloneness to sleep

Who knows the misunderstandings best
Or the level of deceit
No matter, time has worn it smooth
In crossing accepting defeat

            ~~~~~~~~~~~~

There in the future, beginnings could be
Of differences resolved (if upright)
Or maybe harmony or mutual trust
Of another to share in the night

If drawn in sympathy to the one now in need
Lay it down, pick another, for I
Would rather aloneness with memories old
Be held in affection's imply

It's all in the hands of each, you see
Two cups half empty, half full
Upright or reversed, could be love in the air
A time-line from each end that has pull.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2007-12-16 07:23 AM

"It's all in the hands of each, you see
Two cups half empty, half full
Upright or reversed, could be love in the air
A time-line from each end that has pull."

smiling

everytime I think yer not paying attention, you!

I should have known better with this one.

Merry Christmas, Mo! and oh-you-get-it!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2007-12-16 07:29 AM

well..I am even more moody than you, K...so I have to be in the proper mood to even want to do a challenge or even write or understand another's poem...and sometimes this eldwrly mind of mine just doesn't want to cooperate...

I guess I was lucky today~~ besides this one is my life

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-16-2007 08:23 AM).]

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2007-12-16 09:41 AM

v. well done 'write'!

Excluding perhaps the 'rich and (in)famous', I believe that the majority
of folks our age have lives which have veered into the 'tragic'... I have
most certainly been 'rundown' by the (alleged) "American Dream" (and
'paved over' by the "information superhighway")...leaving destroyed lives
and relationships (and 'emotional zombies' at best) in its wake!

Applause for this penning!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural