Open Poetry #41 |
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I'll have to tell you about it |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho ![]() |
hey... you know I remember seeing some pretty astounding things in there too there's an awful lot of strange to be found where ever you turn someone on this planet said it can be a real adventure just sorting through everything that's been left behind right lets everybody go out & look through the neighbors trash jumpin' Jehosaphat what do you think your doing... honestly I can't believe this are you going to take that ya know it isn't yours did I miss something you just have to know where not to look okay so I missed it oh come on they expect you to it's like motel soap hey I'm still looking for a synonym here - I might be able to help you out you know I have dabbled a wee bit in the art of writing back when I was in Jr. high school of course that was a long time ago and thou it's not anything to really boast or be ashamed of you do know lots of tall handsome guys who just couldn't get dates back in those days wrote poetry sadly some spent more time at it than others I could tell 'cause the library was packed with poetry books mostly all written by men I thought you were more interested in art oh sorry 'bout that we'll go there later when I've got more than a few minutes you know mom always said kids grow parents pass and hopefully the fly-byes are gone by the mornin' if your lucky the only ones who will be there for you from cradle to grave are your sisters and I believed her of course my sister dumped many a depraved soul on my stoop that was before I knew failure was not a factory installed option I was just about certain that I was going to have to run on forever I'll have to tell you about it some time |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this was so cool, and the picture was neat...I don't know how you and others like Marge do that ![]() "the only ones who will be there for you from cradle to grave are your sisters and I believed her" loved that part.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool and Sea picked out my favorite part too |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very much enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love these "drops" of beauty and how they flow into the mind and touch the heart. A very captivating write! Love, Margherita |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well I guess that's it for this one... And thank you for taking the time. dale |
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