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Anxiety Days |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Anxiety Days It's a push and pull day. The kind when a mind knows what it "must do" and the body pulls you back. The positives get replaced with negatives and the pounding begins... Heartthoughts, aches, pains, wants, needs... all jumbling together, making progress a slow start. There is a corner to turn, where the air is fresh and thoughts are once again free if only the control was in my hands. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Very good piece. I enjoyed this. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
You have captured exactly how I am feeling and doing today! My mind and hands wish to take me into two different directions. Mercy! Enjoyed this, especially since I can so relate. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wrote a poem once that said pushing and pulling only leads to stretch marks  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bronzeage, thank you for your response. Janette. every time I think I am doing ok and take a step forward am drawn back two. Takes a bit of pushing to get a new life started. Thanks for understanding~~  M Dixie, you make me smile~~ thanks |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello Maureen~ This sounds like my biggest fear, loss of control. Excellent write~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know Nancy, isn't it terrible at our ages to have those feelings. I still haven't left the house today and all I need to do is go to the bank and then order a new refrigerator...and I keep putting it off. And tomorrow I will be fine. I hope all is well with your husband..I haven't read anything new yet. M |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
...likely everyone can (ultimately) 'relate' to this most fine and direct 'write'! I am grandly fond of: "There is a corner to turn, where the air is fresh and thoughts are once again free..." sustained applause!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now for some reason, you make me think of the start of school... go figure! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Bruce... some days are just harder than others Karilea, geezzz I was trying not to think about school again yet. All I hear about on tv and radio is the summer is almost over, yet school has only been out for one month and there is still another month before it starts again. M |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
you put a new more better defined meaning of anxiety in webster...congrats |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Vandana and Devious Intellectual, thank you both for your responses. M |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You decribed this so well , I know those feelings Hope |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly done M...Short...but so truthful in it painting upon your emotional canvas. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is a wonderful piece of writing. You got me thinking...I won't go into it here, but I will leave you with a heart felt thanks. Patricia |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
This poem's a hit, Miss |
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