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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2007-12-13 08:33 PM



She's staring back at me
with those eyes
Baby blue's piercing through my dreams
Piercing through my soul
Grasping onto my heart
Cradling back and forth
In the dark recesses
Of my mind
I want to reach her
I want to hold her
I'm sorry
Baby I'm sorry
I never meant to hurt you
I never meant to make you cry
Let me hold you
Let me love you
Just please
Please...
forgive me
I love you
I never meant to bring you down
Never meant to have you believe
In the things I've said
They've said
I'm sorry I never protected you..
She's staring at me
with those eyes
Baby
Let me love you
While I try to love myself


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.
© Copyright 2007 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-12-13 10:47 PM


Those were very powerful closing lines!

"Let me love you
While I try to love myself"

~ Good advice from you to you!

Love & Love of Self,

Linda


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-14 05:31 PM


Indeed very Powerful !



ARCTIC WIND

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