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openmind
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since 2007-11-05
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0 posted 2007-12-12 01:14 AM


I will wither away from publicity and dwell behind closed doors
I did not run from this misery that has swelled my whole courpse
A fool I have mad myself to believe
That this whole time you were laughing at rather than    with me
I do not know what lies ahead of me, nor do I know where I'am going
The road I have traveled has darkened, a path for me not knowing
I have stumbled and fallen down along this journey to achieve my goals
But what of this passion, can I unleash it? who knows
Maybe I'm tired of these same four walls, dying for a change of scenery
Home is where the heart is, but what does that mean to me..  


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Gumpy
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since 2007-11-06
Posts 143
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1 posted 2007-12-13 11:48 AM


I liked this read.
I relate.

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
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2 posted 2007-12-13 12:02 PM


Oh, I read this in one breath. very good. very good. felt the feelings here.

Tomtoo


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