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Open Poetry #41

a love unknown

openmind
Junior Member

since 2007-11-05

Posts 12

0 posted 2007-12-12 01:00 AM

I do not yet know her name, but I know she is out there somewhere
If we could only touch hearts, and I could show her I truly care
When I do see her I will know that at that moment she is the one
He smile will be bright and warm like the rays of the sun
I cannot believe it has been so long since I have felt love
I believe she will come to me like a blessing from above
So when we finally kiss, no more will I feel alone
Until I finally find her, I will speak of a love unknown.

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

1 posted 2007-12-12 01:11 AM

I could feel your yearning for love in the words you spoke...I wish you success in your quest. I have been very blessed to have found my soul mate 40 years ago...I feel that by putting your words to paper you have sent out a call across the universe that will attract yours. Happy trails to you my friend.

Lincoln
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 62
Earth

2 posted 2007-12-12 01:16 AM

I can strongly relate to this, beautiful poem, it was most enjoyed.

good luck to you

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-12-12 06:02 AM

Nice writing...James

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