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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it never did occur to me there at the edges of nowhere in particular that anything was contagious just you leaking a smile that seemed harmless enough but then you waved too and I should have know by your hands that I would have to try them on to see if the tan came off or anything else really and then we played in words just ankle deep splattering and you pretended not to be drowning so I jumped in to save you but you had fishnets on and knew how to use them on all of the hooks I had brought to bait your affected infection which you said was treatable and you whispered what the cure was but that's something I can't say here __________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it~~ and the way you have with words  M p.s. made it worthwhile to wake early this morning |
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chickoo007 Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 70India |
Would it be right if i said i enjoyed it??? But frankly you are superb with words FANTASTIC!!!!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very much Enjoyed dark!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
that anything was contagious just you leaking a smile that seemed harmless enough yes Mr Daark... leaking smiles can be contagious especially around you!  enjoyed very much RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs, thanks lady friend!! ____________ chickoo thanks so much for the read ___________ artic wind, humble thanks for the eyes ___________ ms R & B thank you babe for the touch |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Okay, I had to find a computer at the hoetel to get my poetry fix and .. know what? You so did not let me down. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az...shhhhh I am in the next room.....I brought poetry, oatmeal (that has been ironed) and a big bottle of laughydew..thanks lil one |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: ohhh, can I play too? Dear D. this is a fantastic write and the quoted sentence has such power that it will be indelibly stuck in my mind. Love, Margherita |
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Irish Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 50Ft Benning |
The connotations in this seem endless. A very enjoyable read |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
but then you waved too and I should have know by your hands that I would have to try them on to see if the tan came off or anything else really beautiful as always.. amazing how we are thinking along the same lines this evening.... Happy Holidays.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful whispers... always full of imagination... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks my lady friend for your read _____________ Irish, thanks to you for the read _____________ ms leej, thanks babe for stopping by and reading ____________ ms sun, you always add color to my black and white thoughts |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Smiles and dark go hand and in hand, and are very much contagious... Enjoyed you here D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms GS |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Nicely done!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks lyric, I appreciate the read |
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