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Green Ketchup |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
I am what they call strange, What they don’t understand, A man that leaves his eyes alone, Away from my eyelashes, So I cant see what I want, What I fear, The tips of lanes, As they broaden their shoulders From corner to corner, The pain of seeing those around me, The idea that were the same, That my eyes see valleys Already discovered by those That thinks their thoughts Mean something deeper, Something steeper. I squeeze my arm, Just so I can feel What it’s like to be someone, A body that has a soul, A sneeze that leaves me, A skin that bleeds, Hoping that I bleed A color that doesn’t run With the red bulls. It’s a walk alone, A walk with millions, A walk that won’t separate me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very enjoyed Write ARCTIC WIND |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
"A man that leaves his eyes alone, Away from my eyelashes," Do you now How I felt when I read this after I just wrote a minutes ago that you seemed had a another eye seeing things for you because you use "stare" a lot? (went to the Archives to read some of your poems) "I squeeze my arm, Just so I can feel What it’s like to be someone, A body that has a soul, A sneeze that leaves me," how interesting to say like this. another beautiful poem. |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Thank you for the responses. Tom, happy to see you respect my writings. I do use the idea of the "eye" or "stare" a lot, I feel as if there is more to the world than "what meets the eye," which is why I believe in another set of eyes, another universe I wish I could see, but I can't, enough ramblings. Happy you enjoyed, take it easy. |
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