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A little mischief anyone?
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A little mischief anyone? |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I'm drunk with faith the moon coursing through my veins I don't cry anymore when I call out your name I'm in love still Because the Angels tell me so I won't give up on my dreams Even though they seem to be hanging by a thread I won't let the distance and your battle bring me down Because I know that you know that you'll still think of me tomorrow I know you still love me How stupid can one be Because I listen to the Angels and that's how it's supposed to be We needed a little break to spice up our hearts charade My dreams have foreseen everything that has come to pass So I'm confident that I know what I'm talking about I always have enticed you by telling you of all the things you never told me you always asked me How did I know? It's because we're connected to each other's thoughts You're the snort to my giggle and you make my heart wiggle And Since you've been gone I've been doing a little mischief dance This idle time makes me giggle with anticipation Because I long for your attention So I'm sending you these mixed signals and moonlit kisses over our broken frequency Telling you That you need to get over what it is you think you need to get over and Hurry back home to me I mean really you told me before you can't resist my little snort so why start now? If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
"I won't give up on my dreams" As you shouldn't! I really like this poem, I am going to save it on my library! lol  ARCTIC WIND |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"You're the snort to my giggle and you make my heart wiggle" Love your attitude and adore those two lines above! *hugs*.....jo |
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chickoo007 Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 70India |
Nice work... but remember most problems in life are a result of saying a YES too soon or a NO too late just take care!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"So why start now." It is true that for those that truly care, absence can make the heart grow fonder...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I'm drunk with faith the moon coursing through my veins I don't cry anymore" ~ A lovely beginning to your poem! Smiling here!  "You're the snort to my giggle and you make my heart wiggle" ~ That's downright adorable! Love your spirit!  EA |
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Just another Pete Member
since 2007-12-06
Posts 74Scotland |
Lovely poem, I'm with everyone else on the giggle-wiggle, brilliant line. Pete  |
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