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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2007-12-10 08:39 PM


I'm drunk with faith
the moon coursing through my veins
I don't cry anymore
when I call out your name
I'm in love still
Because the Angels tell me so
I won't give up on my dreams
Even though they seem
to be hanging by a thread
I won't let the distance
and your battle
bring me down
Because I know
that you know
that you'll still think of me tomorrow
I know you still love me
How stupid can one be
Because I listen to the Angels
and that's how it's supposed to be
We needed a little break
to spice up
our hearts charade
My dreams have foreseen
everything that has come to pass
So I'm confident
that I know what I'm talking about
I always have enticed you
by telling you
of all the things you never told me
you always asked me How did I know?
It's because we're connected
to each other's thoughts
You're the snort to my giggle
and you make my heart wiggle
And
Since you've been gone
I've been doing
a little
mischief dance
This idle time
makes me giggle
with anticipation
Because I long for your attention
So I'm sending
you these mixed signals
and moonlit kisses
over our broken frequency
Telling you
That you need to get over
what it is you think you
need to get over
and Hurry back home to me
I mean really
you told me before
you can't resist my little snort
so why start now?

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2007 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-12-10 08:44 PM


"I won't give up on my dreams"

As you shouldn't!

I really like this poem, I am going to save it on my library! lol



ARCTIC WIND

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2007-12-11 02:17 AM


"You're the snort to my giggle
and you make my heart wiggle"

Love your attitude and adore those two lines above!  *hugs*.....jo

chickoo007
Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 70
India
3 posted 2007-12-11 03:51 AM


Nice work...
but remember most problems in life are a result of saying a YES too soon or a NO too late just take care!!!!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-12-11 04:29 AM


"So why start now."  It is true that for those that truly care, absence can make the heart grow fonder...James
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-12-11 09:08 AM


"I'm drunk with faith
the moon coursing through my veins
I don't cry anymore"

~ A lovely beginning to your poem! Smiling here!

"You're the snort to my giggle
and you make my heart wiggle"

~ That's downright adorable!

Love your spirit!


EA

Just another Pete
Member
since 2007-12-06
Posts 74
Scotland
6 posted 2007-12-11 03:09 PM


Lovely poem, I'm with everyone else on the giggle-wiggle, brilliant line. Pete
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